You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • explain what you like about his new house • describe what you enjoyed most about your stay • suggest when and where you could meet next

Dear Mary, I hope
this
letter finds you and your family well. I'd like to thank you very much for being warmly welcome when I visited and it made me
felt
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like I was at home. Your new house is built
as
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with

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a modern design and it's really looking good. I like the way you decorated the interior design and organized the rooms. The most I like yours is we can see the beach view from your room and there is the fresh air coming in and out. I enjoyed cooking with you and playing with you and your sister. Your parents are really nice and especially your
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mother

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monther
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mother

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taught me a way how to make
a
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easy
pasta
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.
Moreover
, your father shared his life experience and how to take care of his family. Not only I
learned
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a lot but
also
I was having fun and it'll be a part of my enjoyable life memories. As you know, my birthday is
next
month so, my parents will arrange a birthday party for me. That's why I'd like to invite you to come to my birthday party. Hope you will come and we will have fun together again.
Your
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lovingly, Emily
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