You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • explain what you like about his new house • describe what you enjoyed most about your stay • suggest when and where you could meet next

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Dear Mary, I hope

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letter finds you and your family well. I'd like to thank you very much for being warmly welcome when I visited and it made me

felt

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like I was at home. Your new house is built

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with

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a modern design and it's really looking good. I like the way you decorated the interior design and organized the rooms. The most I like yours is we can see the beach view from your room and there is the fresh air coming in and out. I enjoyed cooking with you and playing with you and your sister. Your parents are really nice and especially your

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mother

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monther

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mother

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taught me a way how to make

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apply

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easy

pasta

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paste

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Moreover

, your father shared his life experience and how to take care of his family. Not only I

learned

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a lot but

also

I was having fun and it'll be a part of my enjoyable life memories. As you know, my birthday is

month so, my parents will arrange a birthday party for me. That's why I'd like to invite you to come to my birthday party. Hope you will come and we will have fun together again.

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lovingly, Emily

Submitted by Khin on Sat Jan 15 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • explain what you like about his new house • describe what you enjoyed most about your stay • suggest when and where you could meet next

Environmental problems should be solved by the government instead of individuals and private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation?

Some people think government should ban dangerous sports, such as sky diving and rock climbing. Do you agree or disagree?