Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People
are debating whether
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are largely influenced by
advertisements
to spend money or
people
are no longer affected by ubiquitous advertising. Both of the arguments have their own views
however
I believe
advertisements
play a huge role in our buying decisions and spending habits. From the
first
point of view, it is said that
people
are extremely persuaded by various forms of advertising. We now evidently live in a
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consumer

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-oriented world where the production rates and the amount of waste are at
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high.
This
is owing to advertising that steals our
attention
in various forms
such
as adverts in social media, pop-up adverts,
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sponsored

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influencer
advertisements
and so on.
Moreover
, advertising illustrates a false lifestyle that money and buying things will solve all of our problems by misleading, over-editing and exaggerating so that
people
will consume more and more things in hopes that they will ascend them to their dream lives.
On the other hand
, some
people
are saying that
people
no longer have
interest
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in
advertisements
as they are so commonplace. The reason for
this
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maybe
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that social media advertising has replaced all kinds of traditional advertising like television
advertisements
,
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billboards

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,
radia
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radio

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and newspaper adverts. When we use social
medis
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media

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platforms, we do not realize that our
attention
is being sold without us noticing it.
In addition
, there are so many
advertisements
that it has become overwhelmed and we may not pay
attention
to any of
it
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.
Therefore
,
although
advertising plays a large part in our everyday life, we may think that we no longer pay
attention
to it. In conclusion,
although
people
are arguing whether advertising heavily influences our finances or
people
has become oblivious to it, I believe that
advertising
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the advertising

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industry is growing as ever and
people
are being persuaded by them
conciously
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consciously

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and
unconciously
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unconsciously

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