Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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are debating whether
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people
are largely influenced by
advertisements
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to spend money or
people
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are no longer affected by ubiquitous advertising. Both of the arguments have their own views
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I believe
advertisements
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play a huge role in our buying decisions and spending habits. From the
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point of view, it is said that
people
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are extremely persuaded by various forms of advertising. We now evidently live in a
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consumer
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high.
This
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is owing to advertising that steals our
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in various forms
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as adverts in social media, pop-up adverts,
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sponsored
influencer
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and so on.
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, advertising illustrates a false lifestyle that money and buying things will solve all of our problems by misleading, over-editing and exaggerating so that
people
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will consume more and more things in hopes that they will ascend them to their dream lives.
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, some
people
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are saying that
people
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no longer have
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in
advertisements
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as they are so commonplace. The reason for
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that social media advertising has replaced all kinds of traditional advertising like television
advertisements
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,
bilboards
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billboards
,
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radio
and newspaper adverts. When we use social
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media
platforms, we do not realize that our
attention
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is being sold without us noticing it.
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, there are so many
advertisements
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that it has become overwhelmed and we may not pay
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to any of
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,
although
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advertising plays a large part in our everyday life, we may think that we no longer pay
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to it. In conclusion,
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people
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are arguing whether advertising heavily influences our finances or
people
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has become oblivious to it, I believe that
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industry is growing as ever and
people
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are being persuaded by them
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consciously
and
unconciously
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unconsciously
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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