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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result on a society of individuals who only think their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matter that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
children
 like to have their own opinion in their own clothes food or entertainment. Some
people
 hold that
this
 will let
children
 have a negative impact which only thinks about their own wishes while others think that
children
 should have their own
decision
 and it is important for their future.
This
 essay discusses both views and my own opinion.
First
, it is important that
children
 can have their own thought or
decision
 and try to say them out loud to others. Communicating with their
parents
 or arguing with their
parents
 to listen to their wishes is an important skill. If
children
 can make their decisions and let
people
 know what they like or dislike it will make their lives less pressured.
For example
, in my country
parents
 use to take decisions by
children
’s clothing or classes after school
such
 as piano class, math class or dancing class.
However
, those
children
 who dislike these classes will feel pressure on learning those things, if
children
 can tell their wishes to
parents
 and try to make the decisions that affect themself, they might have a more likely and happy childhood.
On the other hand
,
people
 who think that
children
 making their own choices might result in a society of individuals who only think their own wishes is not really connecting. Those
people
 who only think their own self in not because they make their own
decision
 seen their childhood. It is due to their personality or their own living environment. In conclusion, it is not relative that make their own choices on everyday matters will let
children
 only think their own wishes in the future while in my ,opinion it is important to that child say out loud their whishes or
decision
 because
this
 will make their life happier.
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