The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

Some
people
say that humans tend to copy ideas and material things from each other in sectors that are in trend right now
such
as
clothings
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clothing
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and general goods. While I believe that
people
sometimes inspire
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ideas from each other, I do not think that they copy exactly from
one
another. The
first
reason for
this
is due to the law and regulations of copyright. A lot of musicians, designers, artists and companies have the copyright and sole ownership of their own logos,
products
and names so that no
one
can steal from them.
For example
, the Apple company and Samsung company have
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ongoing lawsuits against each other for several years due to similarities between their
products
.
Secondly
, every popular brand and designer has their own unique style and niche of their
products
and the qualities that they only can offer to consumers.
Therefore
, I think most
people
and
businessman
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will try to avoid copying their competitors'
products
to avoid facing lawsuits and to build their own herd of customers. Another reason is that humans are more likely to inspire
from
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one
another rather than
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the same from each other. In
fashion
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industry,
for example
, there is a specific trend that
people
follow at all times. So,
although
the overall theme and design of the brands may feel similar to each other, after adding their own elements to the garments,
people
will not feel the same about each company's
clothings
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items of clothing
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.
Moreover
, while some
people
might steal another group's idea to manufacture goods and sell them for a cheaper price, customers will be able to differentiate the quality between the original than the dupe. When choosing an item to purchase, consumers will be more like to choose the
one
that costs a little bit more but will probably
lasts
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longer.
Hence
, even though there are some businesses that will produce identical
products
of
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another, most of the
people
will only take
inspirations
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and try to upgrade the original design and ideas. In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I think that the rates of human
being
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copying each other in industries
such
as fashion and other departments are quite low.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • conform
  • social norms
  • evolutionary psychology
  • survival
  • advertising
  • influencer marketing
  • celebrity endorsements
  • trends
  • followers
  • psychological comfort
  • social ostracism
  • mass production
  • high-end fashion
  • uniformity
  • cultural homogenization
  • globalization
  • media
  • spread
  • affordable
  • imitate
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