Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued that what is the main environmental
problem
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of our time and some
people
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think that the most important
problem
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is the
loss
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of special
species
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of plants and animals while others believe that
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idea
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is not correct and nowadays, there are more ecological
problems
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. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the
idea
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of the most important difficulty in our
environment
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is the
loss
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of special
species
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even if there are some good reasons for
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idea
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. In
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essay, I want to discuss both sides and give examples of why
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support or not
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To begin
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with, I want to explain why some
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believe that the main environmental cause is the
loss
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of particular
species
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of living things without non-
people
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. The most reason is generation variety is very less in these days. In the
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period in the
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, there are lots of generation diversity and
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why our
environment
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was better and when we
loss
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of special
species
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of plants and animals, our
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has been get in a dangerous situation.
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, hundred years ago, there were some different birds
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,
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, most birds
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died out these days. For
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,reason the most important
problem
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for our
world
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is the
loss
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of particular
species
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.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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such
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as me believe that our
environment
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has more important difficulties. One of the important causes for the
world
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is global warming. It is
very
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critical issue for our
environment
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and some
people
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say that
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is the hardest
problem
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in the
world
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.
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, living things in Antarctica have some troubles with
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and most of them die out due to global warming. Because of
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,reason there are more important environmental
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in the
world
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in
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these days. In conclusion,
people
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think that the main
problem
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the
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is the
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loss
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of special
species
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of plants and animals,
however
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, others think that we have different
problems
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in our
environment
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and these are the most important
problems
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such
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as global warming. I strongly disagree
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with the
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idea
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of the most important
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the
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world
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is the
loss
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of particular
species
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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