Some people say History is one of the important school subjects. Other think that, in todays world subject like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is argued that nowadays the importance of Science and Technology plays a more significant role in the education of children than
History
. In my opinion, we can not compare those subjects, because both are crucial for society's future and should be equally valued being part of school programs.
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, keeping up with modern scientific and engineering trends is beneficial Linking Words
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for individuals and people in general. Linking Words
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studying, schoolchildren gain the basis for their next study level. Linking Words
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, it will be easier for them to identify the Linking Words
further
direction in getting the degree and, Linking Words
as a result
, to find themselves in adult life. Linking Words
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, a lot of people around the world have a limited set of subjects to study, which causes them not to be able to overcome the low-paid job barrier.
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believe that society should not forget about its origin. Linking Words
History
teaches us about plenty of things and the main ones are: what we have done well, and what needs to be improved. The only problem I see is that "Use synonyms
history
is written by the winners" which means that some facts may not be genuine. Use synonyms
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, a lot of conflicts are happening between countries or even regions, because of mismatches in historical facts on both sides.
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history
should be definitely taught at school with an equally high attitude to each: they are an integral part of holistic education. Having said that, those are the foundation for the young generation and more doors will be opened to them in future.Use synonyms
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To improve your task response, consider deepening your analysis of the question. While you have provided a balanced view, offering more detailed examples and exploring the implications of each view could enhance your score. Consider how each subject (History, Science, and Technology) specifically contributes to society and how they influence each other.
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