Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint.

People

ought to give some part of their money for the sake of

charity

help is meaningful to society. It seems to me that

people

may donate to

charity

because there is a large number of those who

is

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in need of

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financial support.

Firstly

, the main obstacle would appear to be one person’s charitable donation can positively impact more

people

’s lives.

This

affects

people

in need of support , they are able to provide the needy with things that they may require to get by on a daily basis, like food and clean water.

For example

, millions of

people

across the globe suffer from food insecurity.

Secondly

, a

further

issue relates to financial benefits, which means donating to

charity

can save money from tax time.

For example

, a donation to a registered

charity

in Canada

where

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receive

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a tax receipt for donation.

Final

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advantage is leads on

charity

people

; which is to stress on is the impression that these contributors leave behind as they are deemed to be role models in front of the public. As a result, the whole society will improve mentally. It is true that there are not all society members can afford to pay

charity

,

However

,

financial

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capable individuals may

be need

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to bring a fixed sum of money to

charities

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foundations.

To conclude

, it appears to me that donating a small amount from one’s income should be endorsed widely as the advantages it brings outweigh the drawbacks.