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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of the immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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Immigration
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 plays a vital role in society in developed
countries
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 as well as in underprivileged
countries
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. people can immigrate for work, education,safety, cultural issues in the
country
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 of origin or the recipient
country
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,wars and conflict between the communities. It can lead to unemployment, overcrowding, inflation and socio-economic issues in the recipient
country
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 and brain drain, poverty, social imbalance and negative demography in the
country
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 from where people move out.
Immigration
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 gives positive input in receiving
countries
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 as they are getting well trained and educated workers ready to work for the
country
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 which is a win-win for accepting
countries
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. the
countries
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 that lose a highly educated and motivated workforce are at a loss as they are going to lose money for education and training for those individuals.In some ,cases these
countries
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 get some money back in the forms of investment or help to the relatives living behind in the
country
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. People in receiving
country
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 take
immigration
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 as a threat to their jobs and financial security as it jeopardises their job security,housing prices go up as it puts pressure on the supply chain,giving rise to overcrowding,
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 in some cases pay reduction takes place as more staff is available and ready to work at lower pay. ,
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 cultural issues take place if the immigrating population is of a different culture. In ,conclusion
immigration
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 has a major impact on both the
countries
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 across the border and authorities should consider it wisely before approving it to avoid the greatest imbalance between the societies ,including job status of both
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,cultural differences and financial impact.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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