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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 250 words.

#minutes #english #language #country
Some studies mention that the easiest and
effective
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most effective
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 method to learn English is taking
the
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apply
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classes in an English-speaking
country
.
However
, I disagree with
this
idea
 because
dont
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don't
 matter if the person
study
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studies
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 the
language
 in a
country
 with the target
language
 as a native idiom, the real important thing is the
person
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personal
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 effort to learn. I will
to
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apply
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support my opinion in the
beow
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below
 paragraphs. On one hand, there is the
idea
 about how if
people
are surround
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are surrounded
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 by native speakers they can speak and understand the idiom faster. I think
this
 practice would be a good help but only if
people
 put
the
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in the
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 best effort and try to
dont
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don't
 speak with
people
 with the same native
language
.
For instance
, there are
language
 academies that claim that
the
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apply
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80% of the
interchance
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interchange
 students
not
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do not
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 obtain the expected results because don´t get a deep
interacton
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interaction
 with the local
people
.
Therefore
, I think some academies offer
this
 option only to get more money.
On the other hand
, there are
people
 who never have
traveled
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travelled
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 to other countries and have a high level of English.
This
 situation
support
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supports
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 strongly my
idea
 and is the best picture about how if
people
 do
the
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their
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 best try can get
the
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apply
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better results.
For example
, I got a teacher that was highly
recomend
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recommend
recommended
 in my city and he told me he never
leave
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leaves
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 the
country
becuase
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because
 he
love
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tolove
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live
Wrong verb form
living
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 here.
Hence
, if
people
wants
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want
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 really learn a new
language
 they can do it in their born
country
. In conclusion, I disagree with the
idea
 to travel to learn English. I
strong
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strongly
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 believe that the best and only path to reach a good level in
this
 idiom is
put
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to put
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 all the energy
in
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into
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 that.
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