Some people think that children should learn to read from traditional paper books, while others feel that it is fine to start the reading process on an e-reader (like a Kindle or iPad). Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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some people are in favour of the traditional
way
of learning-reading from actual paper books ,
on the other hand
, some are okay with the
use
of electronic gadgets for learning-reading. Both of the ways have their own benefits and limitations and will elaborate on these options in detail in the essay. let's start with the traditional
way
of learning which is simple ,do not require any instruments rather than the book itself, is easy to
use
, has no need for power or connectivity for its working and most important is well-known to the majority of users.Reading books are available according to the level of reading and grasping power of the learner ,easy to tune up with a tutor as it is a physical book,can be used in a group by sharing the book between students by turns.
in contrast
e-readers like a kindle or iPad need a battery or electricity for its
use
,need minimum knowledge of the computer operating system, sometimes internet connectivity for downloading files and complexity of keyboard for using it ,
additionally
need good user to explain how to
use
the gadget and proper handling and keeping of the device,but these devices can be more interactive as they can change colours and fonts with different vocabulary and add music to the content of learning by making it more attractive for early learners. In , conclusion the traditional
way
of learning with books is simple and easy and the modern
way
is complex but more with variations in it making it more palatable for young brains,making it more famous between newer generations with more access to those gadgets.
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