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some people believe that parents should teach their students to be good citizens ,however believe that school should do this .Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is argued among some people that
parents
 should have responsibility for teaching their child to be a good citizen. While
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 others think that
children
 should be taught
such
lesson
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 in
school
.
However
, in
this
 essay, both views will be discussed as well as my opinion will be given.
To begin
 with, most
of
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people
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 suggested that
parents
 suppose to be the
first
 trainer
to
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 their kids. In view of the fact that
children
 spend more years with their
parents
 before going to
school
.
Therefore
, they needed to be trained by their guardian, on the basic level, about how to interact or socialize with others as well as how to become a good person and a good citizen.
On the other hand
, some individuals believe that for
children
 to become good citizens, a good
school
's lesson is required.
For instance
, some
parents
 might not have enough time
spending
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 or
looking
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 after their kids. For
this
 reason, they send the kids to
school
 and
expecting
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teacher
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 to teach and prepare their
children
 for both academic parts along with how to behave as a citizen. In my point of view, for a better result, I believe that both family and
school
 should work
parallely
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parallelly
parallel
.
For example
, when
children
 are at
school
, it is a teacher's responsibility to teach them.
Also
, when they are at home,
parents
 should take over that task. In conclusion, some might think that the responsibility of teaching
children
 to be good citizens is either on
parent's
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 hand or
teacher's
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 hand.
However
, I believe that it would be better for
children
 if family and
school
 could work together.
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