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Now a days many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development ?

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In the present era of science and technology,the way
people
 interact with each other has changed a lot.
Therefore
 ways of relationship making have
also
 been revolutionised and to find out it is beneficial or harmful is difficult as it is in a transition period but , the
next
 paragraphs will elaborate on the issue in detail and try to find out which way it is moving. Invent of smartphones and the internet has radically changed the way of
people
's interact from physical to the majority of instances only digital interaction.
Therefore
 the type of relationship has been changed to casual in most of the cases ,
people
 staying away from long term relationships as it is boring and burdensome for most of the candidates,social bondings are becoming weaker and weaker over time.some years before there was a trend of nuclear families now changed to single families as the tolerance of
people
 went down and they want to live their own life without any disturbances or obligations.
On the other hand
, a person-centred
society
 takes place
instead
 of a family-oriented
society
 where family bonding and family values have much to do with the person in shaping their life. Those single-family houses carry responsibilities on single shoulders if any problem with the family will be broken as there is no one around to talk or for support and there will be a tremendous psychological,financial and physical burden which is a negative outcome of newer development. Fewer physical interaction makes
people
 introverted, moody and emotionally labile which in long run make them psychologically unstable.
In addition
,
such
 single families are in no position to raise the
next
 generation so, there will be a loss of
society
 in total. In ,conclusion modern technologies and their effects are disadvantageous for
society
 and individuals ,so scientists and experts from
society
 advise limited use of technologies in social relationships and adhere to old family values for a better and balanced
society
.
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  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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