A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/she has written to ask for your advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • describe why you think he/she will enjoy it • explain why you recommend studying at your university • give some advice about how to apply You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ____________,

Dear Jonathan, I hope you’re doing great! I’m writing in reply to your
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letter, and I’m really glad to hear that you’re considering studying in my country. I’d definitely encourage you to go for it—it will be a life-changing experience and will broaden your horizons. People here are very friendly and welcoming, so it’s easy to break the ice and make new friends. There are plenty of clubs, cultural events, and sports activities that help international students settle in and understand both the local culture and city life. Regarding your concern about choosing a university, I would strongly recommend mine. The courses are well-structured and practical, and both the teachers and support staff are always willing to help students succeed. On top of that, the cost of living is quite reasonable, so you won’t feel too much financial pressure. Before making a final decision, make sure you check all the application deadlines on the university’s website. You’ll need to prepare the required documents, including a reference letter, to support your enrollment. You can
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contact the international office directly—they’re very helpful and can guide you through the process. I wish you all the best with your plans. Feel free to write back if you need any more help. Best wishes, Prashant

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task response
Add a small plan for the first weeks, like how to meet people and join a club, to show how you will enjoy the stay.
coherence and cohesion
Break long ideas into shorter paragraphs so each paragraph has one main idea.
coherence and cohesion
Split the long second paragraph into two parts to keep ideas clear.
coherence and cohesion
Use simple linking words to move from one idea to the next.
greeting and closing
Keep a warm and friendly tone in closing lines.
content
The letter shows a clear purpose and gives useful tips for applying.
style
The tone is friendly and fits a letter to a friend.
content
There are good details about life in the country and cost of living.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • study
  • country
  • friend
  • you
  • I
  • will
  • can
  • enjoy
  • life
  • campus
  • class
  • teacher
  • student
  • program
  • course
  • apply
  • application
  • deadline
  • visa
  • offer
  • information
  • paper
  • forms
  • name
  • date
  • office
  • advisor
  • email
  • call
  • help
  • plan
  • money
  • cost
  • budget
  • housing
  • home
  • city
  • culture
  • language
  • practice
  • meet
  • travel
  • food
  • safety
  • weather
  • transport
  • job
  • work
  • support
  • friendship
  • experience
  • success
  • school
  • grade
  • letter
  • reference
  • online
  • form
  • deadlines
  • steps
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