In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to latest fashion? Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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two or three decades,
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industry has been improving tremendously than ever before due to advertisements and
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show competitions. In many
countries
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mankind purchases new dresses and chooses hairstyles is based on the present
fashion
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due to
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influencing
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of
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movies, advertisements and
fashion
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shows. I think
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a positive
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improvement around the world and
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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. There are numerous causes for today's population like to purchase new
fashion
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clothes
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cloths
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and
hairsyles
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hairstyles
.
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and foremost, advertisement plays a crucial role
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boosting
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fashion
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industry and they
provides
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enormous
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awareness
about
new
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the new
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trend.
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, movies influence enormously to the public who are watching, present films' all characters wear a new design of dresses rather than
ususual
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usual
designs,
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, people watch
flims
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films
while they like to buy these kinds of new trendy
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cloths
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clothes
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.
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, a Kollywood of Tamil cinema in India, Chandramugi film was a
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movie while one of
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movie heroine
weared
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wore
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a new type of saree in one song,
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, mankind asked the
cloths
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vendor to the same kind of saree like a Chandramugi saree.
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, these are reasons for humankind likes to buy and choose a new trendy
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of
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traditional
.
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, certainly,
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is a positive improvement because people can wear a good dress,
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, they can show their
apperence
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appearance
in a better way to
infront
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in front
of others and self-confidence
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can
increased
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when a person
wear
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a modern dress. To be more elaborate, these kinds of dresses and hairstyles can give tremendous beauty to the public who are using
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as icing on the cake,
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, innumerable mankind likes to
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the trendy design.
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every year new
fashion
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changes by the
fashion
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designers, even though, humankind buys and uses
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even the price is peaked.
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,
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fashion
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dress and hairstyle reflects the technology's breakthrough. To conclude,
fashion
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clothes
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cloths
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clothes
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and hairstyles provide more self-confidence and beauty too,
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, numerous humankind buys and tries these enormously.
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, I think
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is a positive
developemnt
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development
around the world undoubtedly and I hope
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process is conducive to building a happier society.
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