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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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School
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 is the place where we gave knowledge to children a long time ago.
However
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, more and more schools in many countries are facing student behaviour change. In
this
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 essay, I will examine the reason for
this
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 issue and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.
To begin
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 with, the most significant reason for some
students
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' bad habits in
school
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 is that
students
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 play a less important role in
school
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 than in the past. To illustrate, according to the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it has been revealed that 80% of
students
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 who are in primary and high
school
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 tend to choose to study online at home,
instead
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 go to
school
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 after the Covid-19 pandemic crisis.
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 is because they can gain the same knowledge without restricted rules,
as a result
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, while going to
school
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 is mandatory they might have shown against behaviour in
school
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. To solve
this
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 problem, the most important thing is that the Ministry of Education should take responsibility in order to promote the benefits of learning in
school
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such
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 as basic life skills, social skills and sharing opinions with others which are important to their future life.
This
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 would promote the
school
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's value toward respect for
students
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' thoughts to
school
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.
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, the ministry of education should change some teaching methods as well in order to encourage
students
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 to go to
school
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 and
this
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 will reduce illegal behaviour in
school
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. In conclusion, the most important reason for
students
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' habits in
school
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 is that less
school
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's value is given by
students
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,
thus
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 the best solution is to illustrate the positive impact of
school
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 and change some teaching methods.
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