Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Money plays a crucial aspect for human lives due to the satisfying needs and wants by

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essential. Some think that having numerous capital and taking a minimum

amount

of

leisure

time

is better than earning less cash and having innumerable free

time

.

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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, having a plethora of capital and taking a minimum

amount

of

leisure

time

can give a wealthy lifestyle,

thus

, preventing from lack of

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financial

and underprivileged position. A minimum

amount

of relaxation is enough for relaxing, but earning plenty of cash is most crucial especially in today's world,

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decades after finishing degrees,

therefore

, while the population should be worked enormous

hours

for saving money for their retirement age that's why a multitude population earns more money and takes less free

time

.

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, Australians only takes

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times for relaxing and they work more than twelve

hours

per day.

Therefore

, having tremendous cash and taking less

leisure

time

is better for humans.

On the other hand

, having a plethora of free

time

and earning a minimum

amount

of salary

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numerous benefits to mankind because more free

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can lead to providing a happy lifestyle. Working

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a long

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hours

can lead to affecting mental

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like stress and depression,

hence

, some workers work a few

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and

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a minimum

amount

of salary, but they live happy to their life.

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,

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hours

and take enormous

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for

leisure

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activities

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as a result

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cannot suffer stress and depression. To conclude, having less

time

for relaxing and more capital can lead to being financial settle; Earning less and taking plenty of

time

for

leisure

activities can lead to being happy. In my opinion, about

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, having innumerable capital and taking less free

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is

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better.