Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a group of
people
think
that losing specific species of trees and animals is the main environmental Correct pronoun usage
who think
issue
, whereas others believe that there are more urgent environmental problems
which should be solved. Personally, I'm more concerned about other problems
because losing living
organism is a result Correct article usage
a living
from
those Change preposition
of
problems
. However
, this
essay will discuss both of
beliefs.
Change preposition
apply
To begin
with, extinction
of plants and animals is one of the highest priority Correct article usage
the extinction
issue
. Losing a plant might mean Change to a plural noun
issues
Correct article usage
the disappearing
disappearing
of many wildlife's habitats. Replace the word
disappearance
Consequently
, some animals will die out. This
will break food chains which will destroy an ecosystem. For example
, Correct article usage
the disappearing
disappearing
of underwater seaweeds makes many fishes lose their home. The number of small fishes Replace the word
disappearance
decrease
considerably because they can not hide from predators. But Change the verb form
decreases
this
circumstance is the effect from
other severe environmental Change preposition
of
problems
. If people
can fix those problems
the extinction
problem will slightly occurs
.
Change the verb form
occur
On the other hand
, there are many other problems
that should be fixed before solving an extinction
problem. These problems
play an important role of
Change preposition
in
environmental
Add an article
an environmental
issue
and it is the main cause of disappearing living organism. Moreover
, this
type of problems
will destroy Fix the agreement mistake
problem
the
humankind. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, global warming is the
Correct article usage
an
issue
that people
have encountered. In the next
20 years, if the temperature is still raised at the current rate. The human can not live anymore.
To summarise, while many people
concerned
about Add a missing verb
are concerned
extinction
of plants and Add an article
the extinction
wildlifes
, other Correct your spelling
wildlife
problems
need attention. Problems
such
as global warming are the cause of many environmental problems
includes
Wrong verb form
including
extinction
. In my opinion, global warming should be given the first
priority. If we can solve this
problem, we can continue to fix other problems
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