You recently went to a concert and thought one the singers was very good . You want to tell him how you feel . Write a letter to the singer . In your letter Say how you feel about his performance Give details of your musical activities Explain how you would like to help you with your musical activities .
Dear Liliyana ,
Let me introduce myself
first
. My name is James Thomson and I recently joined your concert which was held last
Friday at National Museum.
Firstly
, I really empress your vocal tone on that day . In addition
, I also
appreciate your dress style and performance as well . Although
the place is small and uncomfortable , it is worth enough to listen to all your music. However
, I would like to recommend you to arrange in a large area instead
of the small hall in the future .
To be honest , I enjoy participating in some musical events and concerts which are held by local communities. Moreover
, my parents are also
encouraged me to join the National Songs competition and I also
decided to take this
opportunity.
However
, I need your support to fulfil my goal because I need to learn loads of techniques from you like dressing,performing and singing confidently.
I hope you could help me and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon .
Best regards ,
James ThomsonSubmitted by yetunthu.89 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite