You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter • give details about the concert • describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Robert I hope you are enjoying your new job in a new city. As it is a long time since we met, I would like to invite you to Justin Bibber’s

concert

which will be

weekend. The location of

this

concert

is the City College playground of my home city. As you are aware in my free time, I am addicted to solving online puzzles. I received the tickets after solving one tricky puzzle of mathematics. I had the option of choosing the club membership over

this

concert

. Since I was keen to meet you, I opted for the music show. Since college days I clearly remember that you are a big fan of Justin Bibber. but unfortunately, you were unable to attend a single

concert

. Now destiny is providing you with

this

awesome opportunity. I am confident that you will be there as you are equally impatient to hear him. . Waiting for your reply. Take care, See you soon Warm Wishes Akshay

Submitted by akshay.thakare2804 on Wed Jan 26 2022

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

concert details
artist/band name
date and time
location
guest performances
unique venue
concert theme
contest
raffle
promotion
shared interests
past experiences
attending concerts together
personal reasons
winning tickets

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You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter • give details about the concert • describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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