You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter • give details about the concert • describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Robert I hope you are enjoying your new job in a new city. As it is a long time since we met, I would like to invite you to Justin Bibber’s

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weekend. The location of

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is the City College playground of my home city. As you are aware in my free time, I am addicted to solving online puzzles. I received the tickets after solving one tricky puzzle of mathematics. I had the option of choosing the club membership over

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. Since I was keen to meet you, I opted for the music show. Since college days I clearly remember that you are a big fan of Justin Bibber. but unfortunately, you were unable to attend a single

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. Now destiny is providing you with

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awesome opportunity. I am confident that you will be there as you are equally impatient to hear him. . Waiting for your reply. Take care, See you soon Warm Wishes Akshay

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

concert details
artist/band name
date and time
location
guest performances
unique venue
concert theme
contest
raffle
promotion
shared interests
past experiences
attending concerts together
personal reasons
winning tickets

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