Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many
people
thought that big issues of the situation like poorness and other socialist activities, although
others people
believed that most of the people
are poorly reputation by the earth
. This
essay agrees with the latter point and will show that the creation does not flow to the men by the natural climate, as the potential change by social
platform used by timely maintained.
It is openly argued that the Add an article
the social
earth
's surface is the most dangerous ambience in our world it is maintained by all individuals because there are so many restrictions by the World Health Organization or every country's health authority service. The earth
changes periods by hundred years, this
is various criminal situation for social degradation, if the changing time most of the person loosed by the current position like a job, not only a workable job they are losing a family member but also
government
is provided by a found by every lose family help them. Add an article
the government
For example
, “COVID-19” those time are affected by many countries and helps them any societies as well as
health industries. However
, I believe the administration restricted rules given to them before starting the climate change and safe funding managed by people
.
On the other hand
, social media is the fake news provided in recent times people
are affected by the false information because they are always active guys on this
forum. Govt before starting the climate announced on social media how to maintain that some humanity is edited by the post and reposted by fake news. So, it has a bad impact on people
. Smartphones are the most important in recent situations for instance
, they are not frequently used, scrolling Facebook most of the time. These impact families because they suffer from internet costs. For
this
reason, I believe that concerns about our positive mindset improve by limited use and not given criticism by any networking site.
In conclusion, although
people
are really suffering from the earth
's population change they are affected by many families, this
essay thinks that management rules are most important because all our nations follow them and critical mindset people
are not criticized by any platform because they are affected by mankind.Submitted by nikhilnath1996 on
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task achievement
The essay needs to address both views more clearly. Ensure the discussion of both perspectives is balanced and well-developed.
coherence cohesion
Organize your essay with clear and logical paragraphs. Each paragraph should have a main idea that is well-developed and easy to follow.
task achievement
Use more specific and relevant examples to support your points. This strengthens your argument and shows a deeper understanding of the topic.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps to create a structure for your arguments.
task achievement
You attempted to discuss both views and provided some reasoning and examples for your thoughts.
Your opinion
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