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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

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Many
people
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 believe that living in a country where you cannot speak your
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 language brings you some severe social
problems
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, as well as practical
problems
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. I strongly agree with
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 sentence because living overseas brings
people
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 a great level of isolation and many obstacles. In
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 essay, I will discuss why I agree with
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 statement and explain some possible
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 caused by it. One main reason for
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 is that living overseas often makes
people
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 feel isolated, especially for
students
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 who have never experienced staying overseas. They often claim the difficulties of communication with other
students
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 in local schools.
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, when I
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 came to New Zealand, I barely spoke a word of
English
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. Due to my poor
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, I was constantly stressed about being at school where the
people
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 only spoke
English
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, making me feel left out from everyone.
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 led to a number of different mental
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 and physical
problems
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, which made me way more difficult to go to school.
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, being in an environment that requires you to speak a foreign language brings some practical
problems
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, one of which is a lack of cooperation skills.
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, in NZ schools, we have quite a lot of team projects that require
people
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 to work with others.
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, most international
students
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 who cannot speak
English
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 very well, often struggle to build a good relationship with other classmates.
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 often leads to the chance of
students
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 stopping to go to school. In conclusion, living overseas leads to some severe social
problems
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 and practical
problems
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 due to
people
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's lack of language skills and communication skills.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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