In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Despite the advancement in agricultural technology, many people across the globe still suffer from hunger.
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phenomenon is caused by low productivity because Linking Words
farmers
cannot afford things to enhance their Use synonyms
production
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due to
financial issues. In response to Linking Words
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essay proposes the government’s role to interfere and support the local farmer in maximizing the amount of local Linking Words
production
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Farmers
around the world do not have the same financial ability to afford agricultural supporting goods. Use synonyms
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is to say, some Linking Words
farmers
still use the traditional way to manage their land Use synonyms
thus
they can not maximize the result. Linking Words
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farmers
use fertilizer and insecticides to promote their plants’ growth and to prevent insects from eating their plants. Use synonyms
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, some of them witness financial difficulty in affording these agricultural goods. Linking Words
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their plants cannot optimally grow Linking Words
due to
lack of nutrients and the inteferention of animals. Linking Words
This
causes a lower amount of produce and cannot meet the demands.
The solution to Linking Words
this
problem is to give financial aid, especially the Linking Words
farmers
who have limited funds. The local government can provide cash to them or supply fertilizers and insecticides for those who need them. By doing so, the amount of crops produced by the local Use synonyms
farmers
will increase and Use synonyms
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able
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For instance
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aid
farmers
through supplying free fertilizers in 2021. In the following months, the authorities recorded there was an increase in the local Use synonyms
production
of rice.
In conclusion, hunger in many areas can be caused by people’s limited budget which hinders their Use synonyms
production
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Therefore
, the authorities’ role in providing aid for them is needed to increase local Linking Words
production
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Task Achievement
To enhance Task Achievement, you need to delve deeper into the problem and offer a more detailed explanation. Focusing on financial difficulty alone is somewhat simplistic; there are other contributing factors such as political instability, war, climate change, distribution issues, and food waste that should be considered. While your essay does address the question, providing a broader range of causes and solutions would demonstrate a more thorough understanding of the topic.
Coherence and Cohesion
You've structured your essay with an introduction and a conclusion. However, your ideas are presented in a somewhat disorganized manner. Main points should be separated clearly into paragraphs, and they need to be supported with more specific examples and explanations. Transition words and phrases should be used more effectively to move from one idea to another and to establish clear relationships between them.