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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some factors in modern society that cause this stress and how can we reduce it.

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Stress
 is a psychological problem that some of us experience in our day to day activities. Unfortunately, it is a prominent problem in a
lot
 of countries in the world now. In
this
 essay, I will talk about how pressure from work and financial crisis are some of the main factors of
stress
 and how we can decrease it. There are two main factors of
stress
 in the modern world. The
first
 factor is working overtime. Doctors who work
in wards
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 where there are unusual amounts of patients tend to do their jobs
passed
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past
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 the designated hours.
This
 reduces their hours of rest, and
as a result
, become stressed on their
next
 shift. The
second
 factor which is
financial
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 crisis is another problem these days. Parents who do not earn enough money to feed their children go through a
lot
 of
stress
 to survive each day and make sure their kids are fed and healthy. There are simple steps that can be taken to help reduce
stress
 in these people.
Firstly
, meditation has been known to help a
lot
 of people who have undergone
through
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a
lot
 of
stress
. A simple 10 minutes meditation to calm a
persons
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 mind can have a very healthy
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affect
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 on their
stress
 as well as their work performance. When it comes to financial situations it is important to
advice
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 parents on saving money for the future of their children.
Furthermore
, it is better if these parents find jobs that pay them better than what they were earning. In conclusion, the
above mentioned
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 factors are
undoubtely
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undoubtedly
 the main reasons why people go through
stress
 and they can
reduced
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by
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it by
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 doing more meditation and financial planning so that in future they will be
stress free
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stress-free
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.
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