Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think of the reason for this? Is this positive or negative development?

Over the

last

two or three decades, mankind's shopping habit has been rising tremendously than ever before due to advertisements.

However

, shopping is an inevitable aspect of human lives at present generation and numerous nations consider

this

is one of the most

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of free time activity, especially in youths. I think that

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advertisement is the vital reason for

this

and

this

is a negative improvement.

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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, an advertisement is the vital cause for the

adults

feel that shopping is the best leisure activity because ad gives

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amount of product awareness to the youths,

therefore

, they tend to go shopping for hobbies.

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India has plenty of shopping centre, not only sells goods but

also

conducts some play activities,

therefore

, numerous amount of Indian

adults

like to go for

shooping

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shopping

in their free time with their friends and families.

In addition

, young

adults

want

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fun in every situation,

similarly

, shopping malls provide all the entertainment amenities for mankind who

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youth.

Therefore

, innumerable

adults

have a hobby as shopping in numerous nations.

Although

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this

is not a positive improvement, youth can be addicted to shopping

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nowadays,

therefore

, they buy unwanted things even they never use a plethora of goods.

For instance

, a recent report by London Times said that more than 80%

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of money

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spends

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shopping who being

adult

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adults

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across the globe.

In addition

, they spend a multitude of money

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shopping rather than any usual activities,

therefore

,

this

is one kind of psychological problem of belongingness,

as a result

, they might be lost their capital.

Hence

,

this

is a negative improvement. To conclude, shopping provides numerous happiness to the humankind who are addicted. Advertisement is the main reason for youth considers their hobbies

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shopping, but

this

can addict to

adults

and lost their capital too.

Therefore

, I think

this

is a negative development and I hope

this

trend should be changed among the youths.