Many people say that we now live in 'consumer societies' where money and possessions are given too much importance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Over the
last
two or three decades, mankind's needs have been rising tremendously than ever before, especially in
money
and possessions.
However
, some think that nowadays's humankind gives enormous
importance
for
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money
and possessions due to the consumer societies. I strongly agree with
this
statement and
this
esssay
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discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, today's mankind likes to earn
money
and owns
things
tremendously because they are living in
a consumer societies
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a consumer society
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.
Money
can determine every aspect
in
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humans
lives
,
therefore
, people should be given enormous amounts of
importance
for earning
capitals
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capital
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.
For example
, Indians always run to earn
money
for satisfying their needs and wants because
money
plays a crucial role
for
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their
lives
, especially in
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underdeveloped
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under developed
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nations.
Therefore
, numerous amount of people
give
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most
importance
for
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to
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earning
capitals
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capital
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.
Furthermore
, nowadays's mankind is addicted
by
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possessions because they like to buy any
things
whether useful or unuseful products due to like. To be more elaborate,
a
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advertisement can stimulate to buy
things
who humankind and they create a magic world like
house
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a house
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full of
things
,
as a result
, the population is addicted to
buy
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buying
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things
.
For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 80% of
the
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today's
puplic
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public
is being addicted to
buy
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buying
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things
unwantedly due to consumer societies.
Hence
,
public
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gives a plethora of
importance
for
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owning
things
. To conclude,
money
and owning
things
is the most crucial aspects
for
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of
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human's
lives
,
therefore
, they like to do
this
due to addiction and advertisement.
Money
plays a main role
for
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in
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nowadays's humans
lives
,
therefore
, I strongly agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthier society.
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