Q. some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. TO what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that
people
have been living with their own lifestyle at
modern society. Some Change preposition
in
people
say that it is significantly vital for private and public aspects to enjoy present
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the present
life
. In my opinion, i
absolutely disagree with Change the capitalization
I
argument
above. Add an article
the argument
In
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This
this
essay, this
will discuss why all Correct pronoun usage
apply
espects
like the public and all nations should make a plan for the Correct your spelling
aspects
respects
future
.
For private sectors, having a scheme for the future
can lead to a stable later life
. Not only the living cost has seriously been skyrocketing ten years ago, but also
the life
expectancy is significantly higher than in
before. Unfortunately, the figure of Change preposition
apply
average
wage is similar to that in the past. Add an article
the average
That is
why steadily setting aside money can help them to lead a better life
instead
of just for being satisfied a present life
.
For a national aspect, building a plan for the public can protect human
from being Fix the agreement mistake
humans
threaten
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threatened
several
risky fields. All countries have been seriously put in exhausting limited Change preposition
by several
energy
resources. Scientists have announced that we will no longer have any energy
to substitute power within 5 years. They also
strongly recommend that the government should develop diverse natural alternative energy
such
as solar and wind. In other words
, setting a scheme to develop environmental energy
which is much cheaper than fossil fuel can aid people
to reduce a sense of anxiety related to burden
of living Add an article
the burden
cost
and natural Fix the agreement mistake
costs
disaster
.
In conclusion, while Fix the agreement mistake
disasters
people
prefer to pursuit
their distinct lifestyle, building a goal for the Replace the word
pursue
future
is beneficial for people
to live in better quality regardless of accumulating wealth. Furthermore
, when it comes to nations, this
is able to assist natural disasters to be disappeared through developing environmental energy
and enhance
national competitiveness. Eventually, both of them are better to have a plan for the Wrong verb form
enhancing
future
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