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It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannothave these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Technology is an inseparable part of modern society.There is no doubt that as
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time passes, obsolete and ancient theories,tools, views are likely to be replaced by new, contemporary ones according to existence flow.we are supposed to keep
balance
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a balance
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 between cultural and technological advances. As for
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 It is an old cliche that technological developments lead to cultural loss.They are merely tools we take advantage of in order to simplify,enrich our hectic and overpressured lifestyle.
On the other hand
, traditions and rituals that were preserved by our ancestors may not match with current standards,preferences.It would be appropriate to seek for
golden
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 mean between two contradictory thoughts.
In addition
,I was always admired by
Japanese
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 cultural spirit.They were the
first
 nation
who
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 could combine both technological and cultural
tradition
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.Japan is
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 developed, industrially and economically stable country.
However
,They strictly obey and preserve national and cultural traditions that have been existing over generations.
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One should
 not blame technology or other factors for
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 of
long lasting
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 traditional treasure.
Moreover
,it
depends
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onthe
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on the
on
 place,time and space whether technology is
threat
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 to
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 of tradition. In conclusion, Technological advances and innovation are of great importance if utilised in a proper way. we should not use excuses
such
 as new gadgets and tools are harmful
for
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 the young.The most significant task is to be able to keep
balance
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a balance
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 between old and new periods.
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