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Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the
world
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 is like a small village; every country is well connected.
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, many
people
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 believe that international
cooperation
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 is to protect the
environment
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. But,
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,
people
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 from different opinions said that advantage is for business trade. So I have to discuss both views
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 give my viewpoint in the latter. Those who say that the main benefit from international
cooperation
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 saving the
environment
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, the
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 reason is that the
world
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 knows about global warming and they wanted to solve
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 issue because
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 problem soon affects the whole
world
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.
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, in recent news, many scientists claim that the Atlantic iceberg is melting fast compared to a few years back which is a severe issue.
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, international
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 has taken a few steps to cope with
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. Another thing is done by international
cooperation
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 on the
World
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Environment
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 Day, to reduce the usage of plastic material.
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, many countries have come forward to give up on single-use plastic by 2023.
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 who have contrasting views say that many countries benefit from trade, every company wants to sell their product on a global level,
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 as in India, the TCS (TATA CONSULTANCY SERVICE) reached every part of the
world
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. Their business grows up to billions of dollars.
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, companies like Amazon help other companies and individuals to trade their products
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 the
world
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 level. Buyers can buy products at their homes with just one click on their smartphones because Amazon has an application that helps
people
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 to buy things online. To conclude,
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 international
cooperation
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 has benefited with the business level which is far greater than the
environment
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.
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, they should focus on the protection of the
environment
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.
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