Nowadays many people believe that inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

The present date more
people
trust that in spite of the high level increasing in agriculture field but more than nation around the whole communities still go hungry because now life all the group totally depend on land made stuff and In my opinion, I
agree
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this
statement agricultural so advance and more
then
folks spend good past in
this
future they do not face any problems related to cooking. On the one hand ,some nations say that agriculture is sp advance but aa well aa still the around many
people
not take more feed and they feel hungry whatever main way is
this
reason a human being more try to moving big
cities
.
In other words
,now time many numbers of the party moving to
cities
because they need more facilities and day by day city crowds increasing and countryside not provide many natural foods because in large
cities
do not have many soils.
For example
,In my village ,area all folk put the vegetables and other meals because they have a lot of
lands
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but they do not provide proper food in the big downtown because the large
side
people
only depend on the rulers' sides.
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This thus
,In the future folks face many problems with the cuisine . Another hand,some ways to solve
this
problem like
people
more use free soil and put bread.To explain,individuals do not move crowds level
areas
because
this
type of area do not have many free properties they more try to live ruler
side
because it is good for all and
this
area have a lot of soil and putting anything more.For intense,In my country sarve
last
year 75% of
people
more make a meal in only countryside
side
areas
.
Thus
,In the future population not move to other
areas
they controlled
this
position and they are more using free
areas
related to agriculture. In my conclusion,The government provide to all facilities in ruler
side
that way crowds move large
cities
yet,
people
not veste the food because now time whole family using party hall and that way waste many foods so care about .
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