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Parents are the best teachers. Are you agree or disagree?

#parents #teachers
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Parents
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 play an important role in the
life
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 of every person. They are the best teachers. I totally agree with
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 statement and explain my views on it in upcoming paragraphs.
Children
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 in their
life
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 start learning from their
parents
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 toas how to communicate with each other. They are the
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 gurus of their pupils who teach them about moral values, love and affection in their
life
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. Habits and behaviour of the child depend on the environment of the family in which they are living. If
parents
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 provide good surroundings
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 they gain good etiquettes of behaving in different situations. In 2019, a survey was conducted by local authorities which showed that 80% of things,
children
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 learn from their
parents
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. They proved that before schooling of pupils
parents
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 are the best teacher for them who always provides the right direction to them.
Parents
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 did not leave their
children
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 alone at any time. They are always with them in the form of blessings and
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 provide guidance to achieve success in their
life
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. The age of
children
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 does not matter to
parents
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, they continuously teach their pupils lessons of
life
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 anytime whenever they are in need. The news was printed in the newspaper 'The Tribune' in which the editor explained that more than 50% of
children
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 are dependent on
parents
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 for their learning than school teachers. To conclude,
parents
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 are always considered the
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 teachers of
children
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 as they
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 start gaining knowledge from family members. It is the surroundings of the child which helps in learning various things from different kinds of individuals.
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