Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?

Nowadays, usage of social
media
and news
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channels
are playing
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role in making any individual infamous. Becoming popular comes with a lot of responsibility and risk. In
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I will discuss my views on the effects of
media
coverage on famous people.
Firstly
, let us discuss the positive side of
media
. Currently, most people use mobile devices to consume any form of
media
.
This
makes many
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talented
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to
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show their abilities.
Last
month, I have observed that one guy with singing
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and a good voice became very popular in youth. Anyone can post a video
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just one click of a button. The journey from
ordinary
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person to a famous individual might not be easy,
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the road after becoming
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is
also
bumpy.
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, on the other side,
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fame comes with a price. It is very difficult for anyone to maintain the image of
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themselves
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them selves
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on social
media
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imagine you are being watched 24*7 and
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is judging you for your behaviour, things you are doing in your routine personal life.
Media
coverage
also
breaches the fundamental law of privacy.
Moreover
, it
also
adds up many things just to increase the view count of
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fake news.
Last
year, a singer in the name of Pooja was trolled for rude behaviour in public. She has to go
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thorough
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a lot of troubles and
apollogies
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apologise
apologies
, just to through
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in front of a
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camera
. To sum up, I would say, anybody pointing a
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camera
shoud
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should
be a responsible person. It may happen that someday you will be famous and at that time you have to
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bare
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the cost of privacy
for
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remain in the
media
coverage.
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