Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Humans struggle with choosing something during their lifetime is obvious. It is believed that nowadays we have a
lot
of choices
and I agree.
Nowadays there are a lot
of choices
that people
can choose, and I agree and it is a result of an enormous amount of information which transfer all over the world and the way that people
can reach this
data. Nowadays with the help of the internet information is easily transferred all over the places and people
can access all these just by one click from their home. For example
, a person who lives in the United States of America can search all shopping centres in another continent with his laptop throughout the internet. While in the past people
hardly accommodates their needs due to the lack of choices
, nowadays people
can easily fulfil their needs with the internet by several options.
Other points that can be considered are foods
. For instance
, in the past, people
hardly find a restaurant in their city and also
they prefer to eat homemade foods
but in comparison with the past, nowadays people
have access to different restaurants and fast foods
and take away facilities to offer them several choices
. Moreover
, there are a lot
of new devices than in the past that can help people
to make different foods
in their home. For instance
, microwaves and toasters and electrical ovens give a number of choices
to their users.
It is clear that people
have more entertainments’ choices
than before. For instance
, television provides an enormous amount of programs that can be seen in different categories such
as sports, movies, music and documentary. Video and board games also
are inventions that should be considered as a new choice of entertainment which do not exist in the past.
In conclusion, people
in this
era have a lot
of choices
than people
in the past and make their lives easier than before.Submitted by sinahosseinipoor on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite