Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discus both these views and give your own opinion.
Professional
sports
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players
have a huge amount of salaries if they had success in their area than other important occupations. Use synonyms
One
side thinks it is totally fair Use synonyms
on the other hand
some of them thinks it is not fair.
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if we inspect both sides of Linking Words
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task, we should decide which is most important. Linking Words
For example
, a football Linking Words
player
can have more than two million € Use synonyms
salary
per year and he is just exercising and playing football, at the other side there is a doctor and he/she was studied many years to getting eligible for Change to a plural noun
salaries
this
occupation and practising after that starts to save lives or curing some illness which is more important than any other job. For that, her/his salary is just around Linking Words
one
hundred € per year. Frankly, if Use synonyms
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football Linking Words
player
gets injured Use synonyms
this
doctor will be in charge and try to get him better. In Linking Words
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view, doctors should be more important than professional Linking Words
sports
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players
.
Despite that, if we are just aiming at who is getting more valuable is a different perspective. Another example is if we are comparing a basketball Use synonyms
player
and an engineer. As a soccer professional, the basketball Use synonyms
player
is just exercising and playing basketball, Use synonyms
although
if he is a successful Linking Words
one
and with his teammates wins a championship or gets a cup. They will have a huge amount prizes and too many advertisements because of that. That means Use synonyms
this
club will gain too much money and after continuing years sponsorships give more money, because of that Linking Words
this
club will give more earnings to their Linking Words
players
if they are capable of skills. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, engineers can build our houses or be responsible for our cities electricity or heating systems. Linking Words
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is a very important Linking Words
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too. But these jobs will not return money if we are comparing them to Use synonyms
sports
teams.
In conclusion, we need to inspect from all perspectives, any other job can be important or any person can be. It does not matter what is your responsibility and what are you doing, if you let your company gets more valuable your fee will be higher than any of your colleagues. Perhaps it can be a true decision but in my opinion Use synonyms
sports
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players
and other important jobs, wages should be like that. You can live without professional Use synonyms
sports
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players
but you can not live without other important people.Use synonyms
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