Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discus both these views and give your own opinion.

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Professional
sports
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players
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have a huge amount of salaries if they had success in their area than other important occupations.
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side thinks it is totally fair
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some of them thinks it is not fair.
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if we inspect both sides of
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task, we should decide which is most important.
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, a football
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can have more than two million €
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per year and he is just exercising and playing football, at the other side there is a doctor and he/she was studied many years to getting eligible for
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occupation and practising after that starts to save lives or curing some illness which is more important than any other job. For that, her/his salary is just around
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hundred € per year. Frankly, if
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football
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gets injured
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doctor will be in charge and try to get him better. In
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view, doctors should be more important than professional
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players
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. Despite that, if we are just aiming at who is getting more valuable is a different perspective. Another example is if we are comparing a basketball
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and an engineer. As a soccer professional, the basketball
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is just exercising and playing basketball,
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if he is a successful
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and with his teammates wins a championship or gets a cup. They will have a huge amount prizes and too many advertisements because of that. That means
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club will gain too much money and after continuing years sponsorships give more money, because of that
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club will give more earnings to their
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if they are capable of skills.
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, engineers can build our houses or be responsible for our cities electricity or heating systems.
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is a very important
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too. But these jobs will not return money if we are comparing them to
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teams. In conclusion, we need to inspect from all perspectives, any other job can be important or any person can be. It does not matter what is your responsibility and what are you doing, if you let your company gets more valuable your fee will be higher than any of your colleagues. Perhaps it can be a true decision but in my opinion
sports
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players
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and other important jobs, wages should be like that. You can live without professional
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players
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but you can not live without other important people.
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