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TASK 2 : Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?

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There is a controversial perspective heating a debate whether to nurture toddlers by their grandfather and grandmother
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 of their guardians who always deal with a heavy workload.
This
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 phenomenon has both pros and cons.
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, I would contend its advantages may outweigh its counterpart. Without a shadow of a doubt, nurturing
children
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 who have overwhelming
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 by their grandparents brings a
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 impact on their entire family. Obviously, when
parents
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 do not have to take care of their
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, they could have more time to concentrate on their career path.
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, they would earn a living more effectively which does
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 to their
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 and the elder’s life.
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, students from wealthy families could have a better life than others because they could have sufficient school stationeries or decent meals.
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, elder people who are often infected by a wide range of severe diseases can have money for their remedy thanks to
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’s
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. As a consequence,
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 an eclectic mix of
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 can not be raised by their own
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, they could grow up comparatively well by their grandparents' caring. While the redeeming feature of
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 phenomenon is widely acknowledged, its counterpart still lingers. Unfortunately,
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 who have grown up without their
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’ caring could not understand some proper code of conduct and have lots of bad habits because the old could not punish and criticize them like their
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.
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, If
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 have a chance to take good care of their son and daughter, they can immediately punish their
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 who have inappropriate etiquette and teach them about faults.
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, looking after a toddler by grandparents brings an undesirable influence on their
children
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’s personality. To summarize, the phenomenon of the elder raising
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 of their
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 has either merits or demerits.
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, I would contend that it may do more good than harm.
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