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Environmental problems are becoming a global issue and are encounter-challenging the quality of life.do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries.

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Nowadays, Environmental problems are one of the primary issues for any
country
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. Some of these troubles are created by humans and reduce the quality of life.
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, it is logical that if countries offer solutions to their nations rather than contributing the issue globally, it can effectively decrease the obstacles caused by
pollution
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. On the one hand, the significant difficulty that can be considered is the
people
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's ignorance. Governments and authorities must consider the possibilities and provide sufficient information to their societies in order to educate them for facing environmental challenges related to their region. Many
people
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 do not know how much their small habits can affect the environment. Soil, air, and water
pollution
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 increase daily and cause earnest problems for human health.
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, By increasing the number of waste bins and dividing them into two categories: recycled and non-recycled, less waste is dumped on the ground, and over time, soil
pollution
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 can be diminished, and
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 is the responsibility of the governments.
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, To protect the environment, any
country
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 can increase green space
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 as parks or even build houses with green architecture where no trees are cut down according to their own climate and
country
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's infrastructure, which could be more feasible provided that it be considered separately in different territory. Trees help reduce air
pollution
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 by releasing oxygen and more oxygen leads to better breathing which
make
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people
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's life better and healthier.
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, The Spanish government, along with the adoption of new laws in the design and construction of new structures, uses green architecture to create more green space and give a healthier space to its
people
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 and environmental protection. Some
people
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 believe that, Addressing these problems should be global because it is more accessible, and not every
country
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 goes through a complex and lengthy stage. Still, Each
country
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 can more easily identify and settle its issues according to its
people
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's habits and geographical location. To conclude, Solving the problem individually in each
country
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 is more effective because it starts from small parts and may not be visible at
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, but in the future, good results will be determined.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental problems
  • global issue
  • quality of life
  • address
  • global approach
  • cooperation
  • innovative
  • sustainable
  • international agreements
  • treaties
  • collective action
  • equitable distribution
  • resources
  • responsibilities
  • unique challenges
  • tailored solutions
  • accountability
  • local ownership
  • development
  • capacity
  • combination
  • tackle
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