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Some believe the primary purpose of museums is to entertain people, while others believe their purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Museums have always been a
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 where history resides. Its main purpose has always been to a
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 where people can learn and entertain themselves which can be
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 called a
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 of info-entertainment and not a
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 where people get bored.
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, it is sometimes seen by some individuals as a
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 where they can entertain themselves by looking at old artefacts, like
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 I have seen a movie where named Night at the
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 where all the artefacts of the
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 come to life and enjoy themselves, which I believe was made by keeping in mind that how can a
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 be a fun
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 for children so that they can encourage the children to visit the
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 and if I had the opportunity in my childhood where I could have visited the
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 where I could have learned as well as had a little fun in the
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, it would have been just amazing.
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, if museums are only considered as a
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 where an individual can just learn and educate himself/herself
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, we are not only creating a
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 where people get bored but
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 are creating an environment where under the age children may never visit the
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 as they will always believe that it is a
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 where some collection of old things placed and we will only get boredom. So in conclusion, I believe the
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 should not be a
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 whose motive is to just impart education but it should
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 be a
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 where education is endorsed with a pinch of entertainment.
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