Some argue that it is most preferred to accept
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undesirable situation, namely unsatisfactory or lack of money. While some
people
hold a belief that it is more
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to make an effort in improving
such
a condition. In the following, I am going to look into both sides’
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of view and
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elaborate my thoughts.
First
,
people
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motivation and desires. It is commonly believed by them that there is no
such
thing as fairness in the world as they chose to accept the reality.
Thus
,
this
group of
people
are usually regarded as the less privileged. In order to avoid dealing with endless obstacles, they chose to deal with
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only few major problems which will be long-lasting if they do not take action to solve them,
such
as having not enough money and
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body condition. In my opinion, they are not living life to its fullest, which I do not admire
this
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faith is of utmost importance of one’s since it motivates us to grow and excel. I would, personally, end up with regards if I never attempt to achieve or challenge anything.
At the same time, there are
people
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. The
people
in Hong Kong who dedicate themselves to technology start-ups is a typical example of it. As we all know, the funding in Hong Kong for technology research and development has never been sufficient, still, those founders are making the best out of the least resources they have, simultaneously pitching for funding in the business world. It can be imagined that their lives are full of barriers as they are continuously facing new difficulties. These
people
,
nonetheless
, are solving problems one by one on a daily basis,
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I admire their mottos and living attitude. Life is too short to be wasted and I think that it is going to be fruitful at the end of the day despite all the failures they have encountered. What
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forever is the sense of satisfaction they once earned by their hard work.
To conclude, there are always
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of
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in regard to
this
issue.
However
, I am more inclined to keep trying to strive for improvements.