In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
There are different types of achievements in someone’s life
such
as graduation, finding a good opportunity, and so on. Also
, living in an own house
is more important than living in another person’s house
for lease. I personally believe that having a house
has not only positive benefits but also
negative factors with it.
On one hand, having your own house
save money
because these days renting a house
is very expensive so it is not an investment for the future and total waste of money
. Furthermore
, living in another person’s house
is stressful for persons who are renting and it is a serious case if they have children. If children break something or draw something on the wall, definitely they have to fine to the house
owner. For example
, when I lived in a rented house
, I paid extra money
for cupboard damage which was broken by me.
On the other hand
, owning a house
needs lots of money
which every person can’t afford within a small time. So, most of the persons try to get a mortgage from the financial institution by showing their monthly income as a pledge. It makes huge uncertainty about the family future because people have to save a lot of money
from monthly income for an instalment of the mortgage. Furthermore
, the maintenance cost which should allocate for repairing the house
is also
high. ,Also
it is difficult to move to another area
for any reason if we settled in one area
. For instance
, some permanent residents disfavour to move to another area
, even though that area
has disasters.
To conclude, there are some positives and negatives to having own house
. So personally I believe that it is important to live happily without thinking about where we live.Submitted by nipunakane123 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite