Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

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Unfortunately,

channels

are more inclined to cover

men

sports

shows than

women

's ones in today's world, while I think

channels

should cover fairly

women

sports

competitions

. In

this

essay, the reasons for

this

inclination will be discussed, and

also

it will be outlined why female contests should cover fairly. There are some reasons why

sports

channels

are more inclined to broadcast

men

sports

shows.

Firstly

, sponsors, private companies, or other sectors activating in advertising have more attention to

men

sports

shows. By covering male

sports

contests,

channels

can gain more revenue. Obviously, private

channels

would rather broadcast

men

's competition.

Moreover

, male athletes are speedier and stronger because they have stronger muscular bodies, making their

competitions

more appealing.

Thus

this

can significantly affect the

channels

' policy to cover

men

sports

shows more than

women

However

, some argue media should provide equal opportunities for

women

and broadcast their

competitions

fairly.

Although

women

have fewer abilities than

men

, they should be empowered to accept the stronger role, promoting harmony in societies. When they feel underestimated in society, they cannot show their talents.

This

may shatter their confidence which can negatively affect their future generation when their mothers are not taken into consideration seriously.

Therefore

, media and

channels

should be aware of their policies to fairly cover

women

sports

shows. In conclusion, male

sports

shows are more attractive for ordinary people. So

channels

have more tendency to cover their

competitions

because of earning more money through advertising. Even though not fairly broadcasting

women

sports

shows may lead to them losing their confidence, which adversely affects social integrity.

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Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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