Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

Unfortunately,
TV
channels
are more inclined to cover
men
's
sports
shows than
women
's ones in today's world, while I think
TV
channels
should cover fairly
women
's
sports
competitions
. In
this
essay, the reasons for
this
inclination will be discussed, and
also
it will be outlined why female contests should cover fairly. There are some reasons why
sports
TV
channels
are more inclined to broadcast
men
's
sports
shows.
Firstly
, sponsors, private companies, or other sectors activating in advertising have more attention to
men
's
sports
shows. By covering male
sports
contests,
TV
channels
can gain more revenue. Obviously, private
TV
channels
would rather broadcast
men
's competition.
Moreover
, male athletes are speedier and stronger because they have stronger muscular bodies, making their
competitions
more appealing.
Thus
,
this
can significantly affect the
TV
channels
' policy to cover
men
's
sports
shows more than
women
.
However
, some argue media should provide equal opportunities for
women
and broadcast their
competitions
fairly.
Although
women
have fewer abilities than
men
, they should be empowered to accept the stronger role, promoting harmony in societies. When they feel underestimated in society, they cannot show their talents.
This
may shatter their confidence which can negatively affect their future generation when their mothers are not taken into consideration seriously.
Therefore
, media and
TV
channels
should be aware of their policies to fairly cover
women
's
sports
shows. In conclusion, male
sports
shows are more attractive for ordinary people. So
TV
channels
have more tendency to cover their
competitions
because of earning more money through advertising. Even though not fairly broadcasting
women
's
sports
shows may lead to them losing their confidence, which adversely affects social integrity.
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