You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am 3rd year B.

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Students

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students

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student

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staying in C-Block

room

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304. I am writing

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letter to draw your attention

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the situation which I am facing with my new roommate who is in 1st year of B.A. My previous roommate was cooperative and friendly, we were sharing the

room

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from

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the past two years

however

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this

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not

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the same with my new roomie. Since she has frequent friends visit and they stay all day

along

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till midnight, which is disturbing my study.

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, she is not keeping

the

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things tidy and clean which is causing

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mosquito issues. I would like to have a single

room

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with

separate

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bathroom and I am ready to pay the extra cost for it. If arranging

single

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a single

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room

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is not possible, requesting you to shift me

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another roommate who is sincere at

study

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as my academic exam is going to come soon. I look forward to hearing from you soon on

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matter. Yours faithfully, Ruchi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
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