Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In certain countries, it has become increasingly common for young people to spend their free
time
at malls
and this
is often viewed as a negative. In my opinion, though there are more productive activities
, it should be considered a positive overall given the most likely alternatives.
Proponents of this
statement point out that malls
are typically not a productive use of one’s time
. A person who goes to a mall is likely shopping, watching a movie, hanging out idly with friends, eating from a fast-food establishment, or engaging in another similarly
passive activity. Better use of time
could involve playing sports, reading a book, creating art, or working. The rise of malls
globally beginning in the 1980s signalled a period when younger individuals strayed from healthy activities
and took part in more socially and personally subversive pastimes.
However
, the fears detailed above are overblown compared to other free-time
activities
. These days, most young people who are free spend an outsized proportion of their time
doing truly unhealthy, passive activities
. These largely center
around technology and include wasting Change the spelling
centre
time
on social media, taking pictures, playing online games, chatting online, streaming movies and videos, and using the internet. The mall is now actually a better use of one’s time
since it likely will involve in-person socializing, precisely the domain that is
most at risk for younger generations and society today.
In conclusion, though time
spent at malls
is not the ideal activity for a younger person, it is preferable to a more passive lifestyle and should therefore
not be condemned. It is likely, however
, that malls
will continue to decline in popularity in the future so this
concern will become less relevant.Submitted by mathewtp1969 on
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