Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violent influence on TV and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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that the government should adjust the level of

violence

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in

films

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both on TV and in the

cinema

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, while others think it is not necessary to take action.

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essay will discuss both views and give my

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. On the one hand,

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that include violent factors should be fixed appropriately on TV and in the

cinema

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. The reason is that

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genre of movie has a negative influence on the viewers, especially youngsters. In fact, children who are extremely innocent, tend to imitate what they see on Tv,

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, high levels of

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may lead them to get into bad behaviours. Not only the kids but

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teenagers and adults can be affected by that , which probably result from an increase in crime rate, school

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, domestic

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, etc

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, the government should not intervene in

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case for some

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, basically, violent

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are just a kind of entertainment so it is not too important to regulate anything.

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, most viewers expect to have real emotion and an interesting experience through watching

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, cutting down violent factors sometimes interrupt their mood as well as not satisfy their need.

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, violent factors sometimes are seen as a key that makes the film become successful and draw viewers’ attention.

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, eliminating violent scenes may impact the success of the

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. To conclude, according to each

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, the level of

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should or should not be adjusted on-air and in the

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due to some reasons above. In my

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, I agree that violent scenes should be controlled on television and

cinema

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for the sake of the community.

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, it cannot be adjusted at all to not affect the content of the film as well as still keep the viewers’ attention.