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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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we can not deny that reading e-
books
 online has increased in the past few decades due to the invention of many devices and platforms.
However
, others people suppose that reading paper
books
 can never be replaced since it has plentiful benefits. I strongly believe that traditional
books
 have a special charm. In
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 I will compare both the pros and the cons. On the one hand, Nowadays it has noticed a huge number of websites and applications that allow people to easily read their best collection of
books
.
However
, not all websites respect the copyright of the authors since they publish many novels for free even they don't get an agreement from the writer.
In addition
, the quality of the writing is low compared to the original version and reading from screens may develop myopia among persons.
For instance
, I have seen digital
books
 on many platforms unfortunately it was hard for me to read them because the content was not clear.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of individuals who prefer buying physical
books
 since
this
 price is worth the effort that the author made for writing and editing.
Moreover
, after a long day at work staying on the sofa and learning a book is a pleasant moment to resetting our brain and avoiding all best of disturbance during
this
 time since notifications may perturb the digital readers. To sum up, I am still convinced that paper
books
 could not be replaced due to their strong value.
However
, e-
books
 can be used occasionally like during travel.
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