Some people believe that teenagers should be reqiured to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often said that nowadays about important community jobs and an active actions from young people. From my point of view, I partly agree with

this

point and explain the reasons for

this

in the below essay.

Firstly

,

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teenagers must

to

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respect their society and government. There is no denying, these people having a lot of free

time

and their study not use a full day from young boys and girls.

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, in different educational

centres

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a

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of study have borders and your students can be free after lessons or lectures. We all know students which love

an

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open air

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, to walk in different public spaces.

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situation about teenager's free

time

will

very

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help

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to society.

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, they can

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do community work.

In contrast

to the above point, most of them young folks want to relax at

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their liberty hours.

Study

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is hard and in today's modern world life is

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a very

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rapid, stream and unusual.

This

makes it clear why teenagers want

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free

time

for fun,

relax

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and conversation with friends or parents.

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parents which gave the chance their children for

education

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in

foreign

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city, their son or daughter very wants to use free

time

for conversation

parents

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and doing the community work

instead

. In conclusion, I partly agree with

this

idea. In my opinion, each teenager should

to

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help

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society and his city, but he should get paid for

this

help. And young people's liberty

time

they are can use as they want.