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Some people believe that it is best to do the same type of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many
people
 argue that doing the same kind of
job
 is the most appropriate thing to do in whole life. While others say it is best to change the
work
 often.
However
, I believe sticking to one
job
 is good for career development.
Although
, switching jobs frequently can be adventurous and exciting for the person
but
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it has some disadvantages too.
Firstly
,
people
 have higher expectations in life to achieve their goals. There are many
work
 sectors in which
people
 get higher posts due to their experiences. To get a good
job
 in a specialised area needs
work
 experience.
Moreover
, some
people
 who are highly enthusiastic about their
work
 usually stick to one
job
. Whether it is the media or advertising sector,
people
 on the higher post are content to do their
work
.
For instance
, in the marketing sector, many
people
 who are sitting on higher post has worked for the company for a long period of time.
On the other hand
, few
people
 take risks in their careers. Meanwhile, they are not concerned about their promotion. They take chances and change their jobs from one to another.
This
 does not affect them and they are not stuck to their same
job
 roles.
For instance
, sometimes companies loss could be the factor for the employee to see
other career
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. There are some
people
 who are not determined in their future career roles but the excitement for doing new
task
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 could lead them to switch companies. To conclude, changing jobs quite often could be unpredictable for the stability of employees in the workplace and it has some drawbacks.
Hence
 doing the same
job
 can be some time is boring but it gives the sense of
job
 security for the person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Career longevity
  • Mastery
  • Professional growth
  • Job satisfaction
  • Personal development
  • Routine
  • Work relationships
  • Company culture
  • Boredom
  • Stagnation
  • Adaptability
  • Networking
  • Industries
  • Expertise development
  • Job security
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