Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to travel to our work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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views have their own merits and demerits. Having considered the betterment in it, I would admit that travel or work in oversea countries the reasons to

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a foreign language.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Topic Vocabulary:

multilingual
linguistic proficiency
globalized world
cross-cultural communication
immersive experience
adaptability
cultural exchange
interpersonal skills
employment prospects
empathy
intellectual development
overcome language barriers
global market
resourceful
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