Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to travel to our work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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why
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learn a foreign language. Whereas other believe that not only to traveller work is the reason but
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other reasons to learn foreign linguistic. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational.
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the positive and negative effects of
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conclusion. To conclude with the prime factor of
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view would be the mother tongue can help individuals to communicate and
also
benefits them with a better option of job in another country. In another word, due to the advancement of technology and development of industry highly educated are now welcome all over the world. Because of
this
, they get better offers and jobs opportunity and
also
they give high salaries to their employees.
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, I have enough
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I will apply for a job and I guess I will get the job because I have enough
knowledge
about their languages.
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, nowadays tourism is growing rapidly
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is to say some
people
go there only enjoyment purpose because they do not know about their mother tongue. While considering consequences of
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contradict opinion about it could be different accent is known as they are interested in it or it is their hobby. Some
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interest to collect more
knowledge
about it and
also
they their hobby to
study
the different linguistic.
Moreover
, some
people
are fascinated to
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purposes.
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sister has known
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Korean language because she has
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interest to
study
at a Korean University and
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c she has seen Korean news because of
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they enhance their
knowledge
. In conclusion, the long and sort of
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views have their own merits and demerits. Having considered the betterment in it, I would admit that travel or work in oversea countries the reasons to
study
a foreign language.
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  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
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  • employment prospects
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  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
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