More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and making time to exercise regularly. Why and what can we do to encourage this ?
With the
increasing
in fast Replace the word
increase
food
chains and consumers, more and more problems related to that are also
developed uncontrollably. However
, people now have more consciousness about their health and starting to eat healthy
and spend time doing exercise regularly. Change the adjective
healthily
This
essay will analyze about
why and what can we do to motivate Change preposition
apply
this
.
To start with healthy eating, it can be seen clearly that a well-built or just healthy person consume less fat than others. For example
, if a person eat
junk Change the verb form
eats
food
regularly, they will be suffered from obesity, diabetes or heart problems due to the high rate of cholesterols
and calories. Fix the agreement mistake
cholesterol
In contrast
, according to scientists ,eating healthy helps building
up muscles and Wrong verb form
build
increasing
durability , longevity. So, Wrong verb form
increase
consume
healthy Wrong verb form
consuming
food
are now gradually became a trend and a lot of news encourage us to have a healthy Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life style
.
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Besides
eating healthy
diet, due to the Covid-19 pandemic Add an article
a healthy
which
is a respiratory disease Correct pronoun usage
apply
directly
destroy your lungs. In order to prevent Correct pronoun usage
that directly
from
fatal death, exercise regularly is very essential. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, just some simple push-ups day bay
day can Correct your spelling
by
developing
our immune system even if we have Change the verb form
develop
be developing
Covid-19
virus. Correct article usage
the Covid-19
In addition
, exercising also
increase
our feelingChange the verb form
increases
,
makes us always happy with an optimistic Remove the comma
apply
Correct your spelling
mindset
mind-set
. With the advancement in technologyCorrect your spelling
mindset
,
and social media, we can record ourselves Remove the comma
apply
practicing
not only to motivate us but Change the spelling
practising
also
to encourage everyone.
To sum up, with the increasing
in Covid-19 and Replace the word
increase
also
health problems related to an unhealthy
Correct the article-noun agreement
unhealthy life styles
an unhealthy life style
life styles
, more and more people have Correct your spelling
lifestyles
raise
their awareness starting to practice exercise daily and choose Change the form of the verb
raised
a healthy
Remove the article
healthy food
a portion of healthy food
food
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