In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

It is known that ageing has increased over the years around the world.

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the improvement and alternative treatments that modern medicine

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situation has both advantages and drawbacks ,especially for the families, who are the people in charge and the society and governments for taking care of the oldest in our countries.

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with, I would like to mention the importance for the family members to have the

olders

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with them because the grandparents build relationships with their

grandaughters

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and grandsons.

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they have the opportunity to enjoy experiences with the youngest who have the privilege to listen to the stories and learn about where they came from in their background and roots. At the same ,time parents have the chance to share

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adult life experiences, and listen to

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advice from the wisdom of the other

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members of the family. which I think is very valuable to have more time with the people that we love.

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some drawback is related to health problems and it is often related to serious chronic illness which is very expensive to afford, and sometimes adults require special care from experts,

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as nurses or carers

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them with their health and their daily routine. Another disadvantage is hard to say, but it is the economic cost for the governments

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retirement for so many citizens when they are considered not active members

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society.

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,

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to overpopulation which is a serious subject in the current days,

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the depletion of natural resources.

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, I believe that it has a lot of advantages and disadvantages but it is a reality and life is more important than anything. We should be responsible and respect the lives of those who make the things that we enjoy today.