you have recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. you found that some information is wrong. write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. - what the article is about - what the error is - what you expect the editor to do

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Dear Sir I I was happy to read an

article

, which is written by your news companies author.

last

Sunday 23 February 2022 you at the early morning while I read the news about my childhood friend. The story of a famous

singer

in a few months and give in the description their birthplace, their lifestyle and struggle of a time period.

Furthermore

first

of all, I was shocked by

this

news. But I found some errors in

this

article

. In an

article

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the author said the

singer

's birthplace is in the Jamnagar district but

that is

wrong information because I know well his birthplace, his birth in Devbhumi Dwarika, at Gorana village which is located nearby Jamnagar.

Finally

, I am writing

this

letter because of correct

this

information in your

article

, and please you will be writing

this

article

few days, while will write your author about

this

singer

and if his/her have no sufficient information

then

contact me on my mail which I give you and correct the errors. my mail ID is [email protected] I hope you will write an

article

very soon about

this

famous

singer

. Yours Faithfully

Viram

Correct your spelling

Vikram

Submitted by viramgoraniya9 on Wed Mar 02 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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although
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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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you have recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. you found that some information is wrong. write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. - what the article is about - what the error is - what you expect the editor to do

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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