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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the present age,
celebrities
 and influencers are gaining uneven fame and fortune compared with their achievement, some
people
 believe it may pose a negative impact on the
next
 generation, I tend to agree with
this
 standpoint. On one hand, what we should admit is that when
celebrities
 are gaining money and fame for their achievement, it encouraged more and more young
people
 to emulate, while inspiring numerous youngsters to be more creative and enthusiastic,
as a result
, we are witnessing the blooming time of the content creators in social networks.
such
 as Tiktok and Youtube, loaded with creative young
people
's posts that entertained the whole world.
On the other hand
, it is particularly concerned that
instead
 of focusing on the assiduous work behind the scenes, only disclosing the glamour and fortune of the
celebrities
 may be harmful to social stability to a certain extent. especially when the media are paying too much attention to the harvest of
celebrities
, ordinary
people
 may fall into a sense of imbalance. Especially for the young
people
 with immature thinking, they may complain and angry about their unsatisfaction in life and career, and even embark on the road of crime, as they are incited by
such
 bad emotions. To sum up, the public paying too much attention to the fortune and fame of
celebrities
 may act as an incite role,
However
, it
also
 leads to the psychological imbalance of the masses, which causes social instability and long-term brain drain in other industries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • glamour
  • wealth
  • achievements
  • portrayed
  • overshadow
  • influenced
  • lifestyles
  • unrealistic
  • expectations
  • values
  • promoting
  • hard work
  • perseverance
  • inspire
  • positive impact
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